Grumbler: THE methodology FOR correcting THE physical development of OVERWEIGHT PRIMARY-SCHOOL-AGE CHILDREN

thanks, will edit
next time don't hesitate to post your version and I'll simply delete mine if I notice

There's no need, you had the right idea, it just needed a little help :-) this isn't a competition after all.

Yes, that was exactly my point. It's easier for both if a new version is posted. And better for the users in the future

I agree, I just don't want you to think I'm being a dick.