Danny Boyadded a comment 8 years ago
Для личной переписки подойдет, смысл передан вполне достойно.
А если это домашнее задание, тем более сдавайте в таком варианте, отличное поле для экспериментов будет у вас с преподавателем.
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Алина Даниловнаadded a note 8 years ago
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Скажите пожалуйста, грамотно написано?
I'm sitting at home, sick. And a little too much free time for reflection appeared. Just 5 more years ago, it was completely different, everything seemed much easier and even does not occur to the thought about the fact that once my goals will be scored in this stream of thoughts, worries, responsibilities. I remember with a smile, our brother with relation to each other, it was really great ...
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Marissa Zebaduaadded a comment 8 years ago
Hopefully, soon you will better. Too much thinking is harmful sometimes. I know it is hard, because I myself, think all the time... so hope you find the way to go with the flow... I have been trying. Cheers!
Petr Kuderovadded a comment 8 years ago
Marissa, ^_^
Marissa Zebaduaadded a comment 8 years ago
Ha...Peter.. when I wrote the comment I forgot to translate the russian part which says "please tell me, did I write smartly?.. it was a bit confusing..but I thought it was part of her "dispair"... so in a way, she got her answer. Her meaning went across. Otherwise I wouldn't have understood and replied. ;-)
Petr Kuderovadded a comment 8 years ago
Marissa, I got you :) still, it was so cute and funny)