«Instead give a pitch—one that’s concise and compelling and that shows exactly why you’re the right fit for the job.» / Lingvo Live

Jose Aguilarasked for translation 7 years ago

How to translate? (en-ru)

Instead give a pitch—one that’s concise and compelling and that shows exactly why you’re the right fit for the job.

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Вместо этого убеждайте, кратко, но неотразимо, чтобы было абсолютно ясно, почему именно Вы подходите для этой работы.
translation added by Tatiana Gerasimenko
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Вместо этого, убеждайте так, чтобы было кратко и внушительно, в точности объясняя почему именно Вы подходите для этой работы.
translation added by Jane Lesh
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Tatiana Gerasimenkoadded a comment 7 years ago

Can you add the sentence that goes before this one?

Jose Aguilaradded a comment 7 years ago

Here's the deal: Don't give your complete employment (or personal) history.

Jose Aguilaradded a comment 7 years ago

thank you very much!

Tatiana Gerasimenkoadded a comment 7 years ago

I see. There's my try. You can wait for some other versions as well.

Tatiana Gerasimenkoadded a comment 7 years ago

You're welcome!

Jose Aguilaradded a comment 7 years ago

Your version is quite right for me.

Tatiana Gerasimenkoadded a comment 7 years ago

One question, Jose. Shouldn't it be MAKE a pitch like in the dictionaries?