Liana Nesvadded a note 4 years ago

Это о себе и HIS goal?

Я хотела сказать, что
Я человек, который всегда добивается своих целей

Ну тогда her или their

... for him. For a new phone?

After thinking a little bit about this topic, I realized that I'M THE TYPE OF person [no comma] who will always achieve MY goal. If I really want something, I'LL do everything IN MY POWER to get it.

For example, when I was 12 years old, I really wanted a new phone. But I didn’t want to ask my parents for IT. I decided to save up for it myself. I helped my relatives with WORKED different JOBS and MADE A little money _ _. Then _ _ my birthday CAME AROUND and I put all MY BIRTHDAY money TOWARDS the phone. A couple of days before the new year, I had already saved up all the money and was going to buy myself this phone. But a miracle happened! For NEW YEAR'S, my parents decided to surprise me and gave it to me. My happiness knew no bounds. My parents told me that they HAD SEEN how hard I WORKED to earn THE money and THAT'S why they decided that I deserved both THE money and THE phone. After this _, I decided, that I would always achieve my goals, despite everything. And AS it SO happenS, there was not a single thing that I could not MAKE reality.

But still AND ALL, I found one such thing that I still haven’t done. When I was 11 years old, I started watching American movies. Most of all, I liked movies about teenagers, about their lives, love and school_. And from that moment on, I'VE dreamT of being in their place and living their lives. That’s when I realized that I needed TO KNOW good English _ _ and started taking my studies more seriously. But still, I REALIZED that IT WOULD BE HARD FOR ME TO GET to America. And NOW, three years later, _ I'VE BEEN given THE opportunity. I'LL try very hard and do everything in my power to TAKE all the tours and fly to the land of my dreams. I hope I succeed and, as always, I'LL get mine!

Thank you so much 😁😁💕

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